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Biology has been my passion starting with the first lesson at school. A Guide to Grammar and Writing. ( JD Hancock /Flickr) An Engaging, Individual Voice This essay uses many techniques that make Bridget sound genuine and make the reader feel like we already know her. International Student, special Skills, non-Traditional Age, some are surprising and some are clever, but they're all good examples of a "hook not the kind with the pointy mustache but something that writers use to grab their reader's attention and make them want to keep reading. Ask your parents to explain the back row to you.